Revise one sentence for clarity
1st Grade English practice: Which revision is clearer? 'The dog ran.' or 'Dog ran fast to ball.'. Part of revise and share (Revise and Share).
~8 min
Writers can add a word, change a word, or fix order so the writing is clearer.
Why We Revise
Look at this sentence.
The dog run fast home.
Revision means looking at your writing again to make it better. When you revise, you change words or fix the order so your reader can understand your idea clearly.
💡 Think about what the reader needs to know to understand your story.