Draft sentence: "Kai looked at the pond." Which revision best shows wonder?

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"Read a short draft and choose the best narrative revision" is a 5th Grade English lesson in the Narrative research unit, designed for students around ages 10-11.

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Question

Draft sentence: "Kai looked at the pond." Which revision best shows wonder?

Accepted Answer

Kai leaned over the rail, watching silver fish flicker beneath the pond's glassy surface.