A summary paragraph about a museum visit includes one sentence about the writer's favorite snack from the gift shop. What is the best revision choice?

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Question

A summary paragraph about a museum visit includes one sentence about the writer's favorite snack from the gift shop. What is the best revision choice?

Accepted Answer

Remove the snack sentence because it does not support the summary’s main ideas.