You wrote: 'The bird flew.' How can you revise this sentence to add more detail?

Q: What will my child learn in "Revision: Adding to Narratives"?

Revision means looking at your writing to make it better. Can you add more details? Make the order clearer? Make the ending stronger? This 2nd Grade English lesson builds the skill Narrative Elements and Sequence with a concept card and practice.

Q: What grade level is "Revision: Adding to Narratives" for?

"Revision: Adding to Narratives" is a 2nd Grade English lesson in the Writing: Narrative Stories unit, designed for students around ages 7-8.

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Question

You wrote: 'The bird flew.' How can you revise this sentence to add more detail?

Accepted Answer

The small bird flew quickly into the big tree.