Revision: Adding to Narratives

2nd Grade English practice: You wrote: 'The bird flew.' How can you revise this sentence to add more detail. Part of writing: narrative stories (Writing: Narrative Stories).

~10 min

Revision means looking at your writing to make it better. Can you add more details? Make the order clearer? Make the ending stronger?

You wrote: 'The bird flew.' How can you revise this sentence to add more detail?